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  • 投稿者 | 2012-09-11 17:10

    私も、いくつか出来損ないの英語短編小説を書き、破滅派同人の幾人かには、ちょこっと目を通していただいたりもしております。とはいえ、いまのところ、「間違いだらけ」のものしか書けない状態です。
    おなじような悩みを持つ方、あるいは、いまから英語で書いてみよう、と思っている方、意見交換いたしましょう。

    なお、下は数日前から書き始めたもののさわり、というか、以前書いたもののリライトです。
    なお、間違いを発見なさったときはご指摘ください。

    Мusic Room

    The hall where she now stood was large. Nobody was in there, so Naomi put on some lipstick by her reflection in a glass of French door. And she wondered if there was any special reason she had been selected out of a number of musicians.・・・
    The young violinist looked as if she was a cover girl of mode magazine. She knew she could look fascinating without ornament. In a word, she was gorgeous. But she was feeling solitude and utterly forlorn. And she knew gentlemen insisted on the sex they like male cats.

    Windows were shut tight. There was total silence within the music room. Naomi found Haruki Isiguro alone on the platform.
    “Miss Naomi Noda, good evening” Isiguro said softly.
    “Good evening Mr. Isiguro”
    She stood beside a piano while her voice hollowly echoed in the room.・・・
    “Please sit down”
    When Naomi did not sit immediately, he took a step towards her and touched her shoulder. Naomi’s left hand was clenched on the back of the chair in side of her.
    Certainly something force was with him. He was more eager teacher that night.
    Before Naomi knew what had happened, his face was near her face, and he was breathing in her ear.
    “You are doing very well”
    She was quite surprised to hear his voice, and felt a knocking in her chest. Her facial expression stiffened.
    “Thank you so much, sir”
    “I’m always thinking hard about your future. Do you see what I mean?”
    He only wanted something very simple.
    “Sure”
    But Naomi was wavering instead of making decision immediately. Her voice was rather feebler when she spoke again.

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